Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Revision: Fostering Invasive Practices

Pickering, Kristen Walker. “Revising for Activity Purposes: Improving Document Design for
Reader-Oriented Activities.” Writing the Visual: A Practical Guide for Teachers of
Composition and Communication. Ed. Carol David and Anne R. Richards. Parlor Press
LLC: Lafayette, Indiana. 2008. Print.

This article takes activity theory as the foundation of graphic and/or visual examination. The document revision assignment focuses on improving student documents that either do not manage to incorporate both text and graphics or that do so ineffectively. The assignment Pickering outlines is that students must find a public document and revise its images and text. It may be a document that is already effective in general, but that can be revised to address another audience more effectively. Several things are emphasized to the students as they tackle this assignment: first, they are encouraged to analyze readers’ needs. Cultural knowledge is thus essential—the context of likely reading constitutes the matrix, here. From Pickering’s perspective, students don’t need to be trained in ethnographic research in order to understand the context of a particular readership; they do, however, need to inquire and observe enough to understand how to communicate effectively within that context. What I like best about this assignment is that it offers students the freedom to experiment with pretty invasive revisions. Since the original document is not their own and does not represent their own personal best (even if it would only have been their best up to that point), revision does not symbolize backtracking or failing and restarting when it is presented as first a mental exercise (they plan/propose revisions), second a practical exercise (they create and insert their revisions), and only third as a personal/self-reflective practice (this step is not even present in the assignment; presumably invasive creative ambitious revision practices would, however, carry over to students’ own documents).

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